Friday, 26 August 2016
winning gold!
Winning Gold!
WALT: create mood in our writing.
Topic: NZ Olympic Gold
Audience: PES, friends, teacher, whanau, worldwide blog audience.
Purpose: To share our thoughts on what it would be like to win an Olympic Gold Medal.
You have just won Gold at an Olympic Sport and are now standing on the podium receiving your medal. What feelings do you want the reader to get?
Paragraph 1
Setting: Where are you? What is happening around you? What can you see? What can you hear?
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3 sentences
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MakerBots & Drones
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4 sentences
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Makeymakeys & Hyperduinos
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Write Here:
I was standing on the podium at the Olympics. I came first in javelin . I heard the crowd cheering clapping supporting when I went on the podium . I saw my country's flag and my whole family. People were supporting me and cheering .
Paragraph 2
Events: What happened? What did you get given? What did you do as you stood there? How did you feel?
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4 sentences
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MakerBots & Drones
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4 sentences
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Makeymakeys & Hyperduinos
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Write Here:
I was given a gold medal and a trophy for shooting the highest javelin stick than ever . while I was standing there I waved at the crowd while I was standing on the podium. I felt very proud of myself and very nervous because I never thought that I was going to win a gold medal and that's why I am very proud.
Thursday, 18 August 2016
Wednesday, 17 August 2016
nz Olympic mascot.
WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.
WALT: add detail to our sentences to make our writing interesting.
Topic: NZ Olympic Mascot
Audience: PES, friends, teacher, whanau, worldwide blog audience.
Purpose: To tell anyone in the world who reads our blogs about our NZ Olympic Mascots.
Text type: Report
Planning: Juicy words to help you add detail to your sentences
Who am I?
What are my special powers?
What do I like to do?
Where do I live?
What is my mission?
Paragraph 1
Who am I?
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2 sentences
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MakerBots & Drones
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3 sentences
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Makeymakeys & Hyperduinos
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Write Here:
My name is doris the kiwi. . I have a big shiny beak and some small claws. And
I love to make new friends. I like to run jump throw and swim I am a good swimmer.My favourite things is to do is play sing and sprint . I am 21 years old, I was born 4 of august 2016
Paragraph 2
What are my special powers?
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2 sentences
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MakerBots & Drones
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3 sentences
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Makeymakeys & Hyperduinos
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Write Here:
My special powers are that I can jump really high I can run really fast and I hide very good I can stretch really really far as long as I can.
Paragraph 3
What is my mission?
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2 sentences
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MakerBots & Drones
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3 sentences
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Makeymakeys & Hyperduinos
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Write Here:
My mission is to spread joy throughout the world just like the other mascots.
Tuesday, 16 August 2016
yum yum
Yum Yum!
WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.
Only 2 sentences:
One monday morning I walked into class and something strange was happening. I looked on a table there was two boxes I looked up I saw a sign it said do not touch! It was interesting i wonder what was it .
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Photo - what you saw in class.
Paragraph 2
What did you do?
Only 2 sentences:
The first thing we did is we had to choose a partner so I chose my friend hazel. And after that she grabbed a bandana and she wrapped it around my eyes i was so excited I wonder what was happening.
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Photo - what you had to do.
Paragraph 3
How did it taste?
Only 2 sentences:
It tasted like slimy wobbly lime delicious. I was so surprised it was jelly. it was so Yum. After that my friend took off the bandana and I could see everything again .
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Photo - tasting the food.
Paragraph 4
Conclusion: What was your highlight?
Only 1 sentences:
My favourite part of the day was when my friend blindfolded me because it was so funny.hahahahaha.
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Photo - you choose.
Monday, 15 August 2016
Thursday, 11 August 2016
Friday, 5 August 2016
pes Olympics -egg 20metre sprint.
WALT: write an interesting recount by adding detail to the end of our sentences.
WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.
Topic: PES Olympics Egg 20metre Sprint race.
Audience: PES, friends, teacher, whanau, worldwide blog audience.
Purpose: To tell the worldwide people who read our blogs about our egg race.
Text type: Recount
Planning: Juicy words to help you add detail to your sentences
Yolk, sprint, frightened, nervous, killing, died, happy, excited, shaking, crunching, crunched, spoon, running, fighting, rotten, egg, decorating, designing, name,eggy, sadly, hair, pen, vivid, country,brazil buddy, Olympics, crying, PES Olympics, frustrated, delicate,
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introduction : who, where, what, when
Describe your egg -draw on ideas,name ,country
Start the, instructions
What happened during the race.
What happened to your friends .
Paragraph 1 - Introduction
introduction : who, where, what, when
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1 sentences
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MakerBots & Drones
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2 sentences
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Makeymakeys & Hyperduinos
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Write Here:
On Monday we had an egg race, Rm 9 walked to the park and we got an egg and a vivid, we drew a face on it. We had a spoon then picked up our egg and placed the egg on top of it.
Paragraph 2
2 sentences
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3 sentences
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Makeymakeys & Hyperduinos
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Write Here:
Our class rm 9 got into a line because we were about to start the race. Our teacher told us the instructions then we started the race .
Paragraph 3
2 sentences
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MakerBots & Drones
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3 sentences
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Makeymakeys & Hyperduinos
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Write Here:
My friend lucy’s egg went splat on the ground, she was terrified! Then someone else dropped there egg it was calais’s egg her egg went smash on the floor.
Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
What was your highlight.
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1 sentences
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MakerBots & Drones
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1 sentences
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Makeymakeys & Hyperduinos
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Write Here:
My highlight was when we got to draw on a egg it was fun.
Monday, 1 August 2016
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