Tuesday, 11 April 2017

My Animation voice over.

Animation Writing and Voice Over
Walt be thoughtful about links between oral (spoken), written, and visual language to give purpose to our writing.
Walt develop our correct use of punctuation.

Myth/ legend you are animating (choose 1)
  • Maui and the Giant Fish
Retell/ summaries the myth/ legend IN YOUR OWN WORDS.
This should not be long. Think of how long your voice over needs to be.
One day a man called Maui was angry that his brothers didn’t let him go fishing with them so Maui went by himself. so while Maui was out at sea he said it was a good spot so he grabbed his hook and rope and threw it deep deep into the sea. Then Maui  waited and waited until whoop whoop! Something was pulling on the rope. Maui stood up and pulled the rope as hard as he could. then the giant fish rose up to the top of the sea like a gigantic floating fish. When Maui's brothers saw Maui they ran up and were amazed! after a few days Maui fish became the North Island of Aotearoa.

Link to an online text/ video:
How does this myth/ legend link to the environment?
This story tells us how New Zealand was made and how it was planted with lots and lots of beautiful plants.


Year 5/6 Camp - Writing

We are going to be writing about our camp experiences.

Walt: add detail to our writing to support our ideas
Walt: reflect on events and our experiences

Amazing! Team 4 had a cool camp on Pt England School grounds, on wednesday 8th of march 2017 last week. first we had to bring our big bags for camp. throughout the 3 days that we had for activities.

The first camp activity that the Chiefs had to do was the camp concert,kayaking,killer zone but my favorite most fun event was going to the pools it was the best 3 days of my LIFE!!(:

My favorite highlight was how we got to have fun and play with our friends also got to know people that I didn’t know and how I got  to be friends with them.
I learned how to be kind ,loyal,and friendly to people that were bringing kindness back to me I recommend that every student will do by helping each other and other people will learn to do that in the future. Also it was fun to work as a team and help those in need.
Thank you Mr burt and teachers who made this  possible for school and thank you to the parents/helpers who came to help our camp and supported the camp so thank you very much:) .  what I liked about camp was it was fun and exciting to do all those activities it was such awesomeness.  THANK YOU!!!!!