The little Boat.

The little boat

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Once upon a time there was a little boat and inside the tiny  boat  was a boy named jumping John.John he was fishing with his Dad.While John was fishing he caught something really big he wondered what it was? So they kept on pulling and pulling until...splash came out a humongous shark  John was really scared him and Dad were paddling as fast as they could but it was no use so the shark tipped over the boat but John and his Dad were still safe.

It has been 10 days since John and his Dad had been sitting on top of the boat but John’s Dad had a rescue phone his Dad kept on ringing and ringing but it didn’t work so John’s Dad tried   jumping over the huge shark but John thought it was a crazy idea so John tried thinking of something in just one hour John saw two vines so John quickly grabbed the vines until the big  shark could eat him so he grabbed it gave one to his Dad and both of them crossed the water safe and sound so they starting walking…

While they were walking John heard a loud roar they wonder what it might be…. Then boom came out an enormous bear John quickly grabbed a stick and kept on whacking the bear but the bear didn’t feel a sting so John dropped the stick John yelled ‘’run for our lives’’ they ran as fast as they could till the bear could see them no more John and his Dad stopped for a minute John’s Dad tried ringing and ringing until there it worked John’s dad rang a helicopter to save them. In just one day John and his dad saw a helicopter they starting waving at it and then it came then they safely went back home .the end.

The kayaking Trip.

The Kayaking Trip

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Walt: write a narrativeWalt: use and write paragraphs, detailed sentences, juicy words, full stops, capital letters and correct spelling.

Some people go on a kayaking trip down a river. The trip does not go exactly to plan...Write to narrate (tell) a story about this adventure.

What is the problem? What goes wrong?

How is it solved and fixed?

Think about:

• where your story is set (setting).
• who your characters are – what they do, what they say, and how they think and feel
• What the problem is and how it is fixed.
• the order of your ideas and how they are linked.

Remember to:

• Break your writing into paragraphs (big ideas).
• choose your words carefully.
• Be careful with your spelling, punctuation (capital letters, full stops) and sentences.
• edit – add or delete words or sentences to improve your work.

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Planning Space

Crocodiles, attacking ,

Start Writing Here:

It was a windy wild morning in the forest, one day a group of kayakers came along by the river they got into there kayaker then started paddling  while they were paddling by splash there jumped out a humongous crocodile right at them the kayakers were terrified they felt like screaming and really really scared  they tried to swim to shore but the crocodile pushed them near a huge waterfall .

The kayakers were frightened they thought they were gonna die! They started paddling and paddling but they couldn’t get to shore it was a dead end but wait one kayaker saw a vine he told the other kaykers to hold on to the vine so they did they held on very tight the vine was very strong so they climbed up the vine .

So they walked safely back to shore while as they walked roaaaaaaaaar!  Came out a gigantic bear the kayakers screamed ‘’run for your lives’’ one kayaker said but one kayaker stayed where he was  and didn’t move a muscle the kayaker knew why the bear was so angry he gave him a honey jar then the bear went back to it’s cave so then the kayakers stopped screaming and started walking back home .

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