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Thursday, 1 September 2016

pes Olympics wheelbarrow race!

PES Olympics Wheelbarrow Race!




      
WALT: write an interesting recount by writing about our feelings and the feelings of others.
WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.


Topic: PES Wheelbarrow race
Audience: PES, friends, teacher, whanau, worldwide blog audience.
Purpose: To retell our Pt England School Wheelbarrow Race and share our thoughts on technology and cheating.

Room 9 has just completed the PES Olympics wheelbarrow race. Apparently there was some cheating in the race? How did this cheating affect you and your race?


Paragraph Options:
What happened during the race.
Who cheated and why it was cheating. How I felt about the cheating.
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What is another technology that people use to cheat.






Paragraph 1
Introduction: Who, Where,What, When?
           What were your feelings?
2  sentences
MakerBots & Drones
4  sentences
Makeymakeys & Hyperduinos
Write Here:
On tuesday 30th of august  rm 9 had a wheelbarrow race. We started off in the pt england school hall.Today I walked into class and I saw a wheelbarrow I wondered what are we going to do today. So when the second bell rang our teacher told us to line up outside  and walk to the breeze.So when we were in the breeze our teacher said to sit on the stone and  we are going to race  and I was so so nervous and I had butterfly in my tummy  .





Paragraph 2   

What happened during the race.
4  sentences
MakerBots & Drones
4  sentences
Makeymakeys & Hyperduinos
Write Here:
During the race it was quite hard to stay on our hands  and quite hard walking on our hands when the girls had their  turn when the boys counted down-5 -4-3-2-1-go! When we started all the girls started falling instead of crawling it was really funny .



Paragraph 3   
Who cheated and why it was cheating. How I felt about the cheating.
4  sentences
MakerBots & Drones
4  sentences
Makeymakeys & Hyperduinos
Write Here:
Our teacher was cheating because it was UNFAIR but It was pretty cool watching our teacher driving the people that was in the wheelbarrow because they were going really fast.But we were just using it for technology and it was so cool.





Paragraph 4   
Conclusion: Feelings about the race/cheating.
2  sentences
MakerBots & Drones
3  sentences
Makeymakeys & Hyperduinos
Write Here:

My feelings about the cheating: jealous,crazy,mad,cross,stink and outrageous.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Esther
    We really enjoyed reading about the wheelbarrow race you had at school. You had some interesting words, especially when you shared your feelings. What was your favourite part? Remember to re-read your story to make sure it makes sense.
    From
    Room 9.

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