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Friday 26 August 2016

maths problem solving.

winning gold!

Winning Gold!
WALT: create mood in our writing.                      


Topic: NZ Olympic Gold
Audience: PES, friends, teacher, whanau, worldwide blog audience.
Purpose: To share our thoughts on what it would be like to win an Olympic Gold Medal.


You have just won Gold at an Olympic Sport and are now standing on the podium receiving your medal. What feelings do you want the reader to get?






Paragraph 1
Setting: Where are you? What is happening around you? What can you see? What can you hear?
3  sentences
MakerBots & Drones
4  sentences
Makeymakeys & Hyperduinos
Write Here:
 I was standing on the podium at the Olympics. I came first in javelin . I heard the crowd cheering clapping supporting when I went on the podium . I saw my  country's flag  and my whole family. People were supporting me and cheering .



Paragraph 2   
Events: What happened? What did you get given? What did you do as you stood there? How did you feel?
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MakerBots & Drones
4  sentences
Makeymakeys & Hyperduinos
Write Here:

I was given  a gold medal and a trophy for shooting the highest javelin stick than ever . while I was standing there I waved at the crowd while I was standing on the podium. I felt very proud of myself and very nervous because I never thought that I was going to win a gold medal and that's why I am very  proud.

Wednesday 17 August 2016

maths problem solving .

nz Olympic mascot.


 
Silver fern flag
WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.
WALT: add detail to our sentences to make our writing interesting.
Topic: NZ Olympic Mascot
Audience: PES, friends, teacher, whanau, worldwide blog audience.
Purpose: To tell anyone in the world who reads our blogs about our NZ Olympic Mascots.
Text type: Report

Planning: Juicy words to help you add detail to your sentences



Who am I?
What are my special powers?
What do I like to do?
Where do I live?
What is my mission?






Paragraph 1
Who am I?
2  sentences
MakerBots & Drones
3  sentences
Makeymakeys & Hyperduinos
Write Here:
My name is doris the kiwi.  . I have a big shiny beak and some small claws. And
I love to make new friends. I like to run jump throw and swim I am a good swimmer.My favourite things is to do is play sing and sprint . I am 21 years old, I was born 4 of august 2016




Paragraph 2   
What are my special powers?
2  sentences
MakerBots & Drones
3  sentences
Makeymakeys & Hyperduinos
Write Here:
My special powers are  that I can jump really high I can run really fast and I hide very good I can stretch really really far as long as I can.




Paragraph 3   
What is my mission?
2  sentences
MakerBots & Drones
3  sentences
Makeymakeys & Hyperduinos
Write Here:
My mission is to spread joy throughout the world just like the other mascots.




Tuesday 16 August 2016

yum yum

Yum Yum!Free vector graphic: Mouth,
WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.





Only 2 sentences:
One monday morning I walked into class and something strange was happening. I looked on a table there was two boxes I  looked up I  saw a sign it said do not touch! It was interesting i wonder what was it . Screenshot 2016-06-15 at 9.55.32 AM.png
Photo - what you saw in class.
      
Paragraph 2    
What did you do?                  
Only 2 sentences:
The first thing we did is we had to choose a partner so I  chose my friend hazel. And after that she grabbed a bandana and she wrapped it around my eyes i was so excited I  wonder what was happening.JPEG Image
Photo - what you had to do.


Paragraph 3     
How did it taste?                  
Only 2 sentences:
It tasted like slimy  wobbly lime delicious. I was so surprised it was jelly. it was so Yum. After that my  friend  took off the bandana and I could see everything again .
JPEG Image
Photo - tasting the food.


Paragraph 4    
Conclusion: What was your highlight?                 
Only 1 sentences:
My favourite part of the day was when my friend blindfolded me because it was so funny.hahahahaha.
Photo - you choose.
JPEG Image

Friday 5 August 2016

Olympic mascot quiz.

pes Olympics -egg 20metre sprint.

Mad egg emoticon - Public

WALT: write an interesting recount by adding detail to the end of our sentences.
WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.
Topic: PES Olympics Egg 20metre Sprint race.
Audience: PES, friends, teacher, whanau, worldwide blog audience.
Purpose: To tell the worldwide people who read our blogs about our egg race.
Text type: Recount

Planning: Juicy words to help you add detail to your sentences
Yolk, sprint, frightened, nervous, killing, died, happy, excited, shaking, crunching, crunched, spoon, running, fighting, rotten, egg, decorating, designing, name,eggy, sadly, hair, pen, vivid, country,brazil  buddy, Olympics, crying, PES Olympics, frustrated, delicate,  
introduction : who, where, what, when

Describe your egg -draw on ideas,name ,country

Start the, instructions

What happened during the race.

What happened to your friends .






Paragraph 1 - Introduction
introduction : who, where, what, when
1  sentences
MakerBots & Drones
2  sentences
Makeymakeys & Hyperduinos
Write Here:
On Monday we had an  egg race, Rm 9   walked  to the park and we got an egg and a vivid, we drew a face on it. We had a spoon then picked up our egg and placed the egg on top of it.




Paragraph 2   

2  sentences
MakerBots & Drones
3  sentences
Makeymakeys & Hyperduinos
Write Here:
Our class rm 9 got into a line because we were  about to start the race. Our teacher told us the instructions then we started the race .





Paragraph 3   

2  sentences
MakerBots & Drones
3  sentences
Makeymakeys & Hyperduinos
Write Here:
My friend lucy’s egg went splat on the ground, she was terrified! Then someone else dropped there egg it was calais’s egg her egg went smash on the floor.




Paragraph 4 - Conclusion   
What was your highlight.
1  sentences
MakerBots & Drones
1  sentences
Makeymakeys & Hyperduinos
Write Here:
My highlight was when we got to draw on a egg it was fun.



matching task.