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Friday, 5 August 2016

pes Olympics -egg 20metre sprint.

Mad egg emoticon - Public

WALT: write an interesting recount by adding detail to the end of our sentences.
WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.
Topic: PES Olympics Egg 20metre Sprint race.
Audience: PES, friends, teacher, whanau, worldwide blog audience.
Purpose: To tell the worldwide people who read our blogs about our egg race.
Text type: Recount

Planning: Juicy words to help you add detail to your sentences
Yolk, sprint, frightened, nervous, killing, died, happy, excited, shaking, crunching, crunched, spoon, running, fighting, rotten, egg, decorating, designing, name,eggy, sadly, hair, pen, vivid, country,brazil  buddy, Olympics, crying, PES Olympics, frustrated, delicate,  
introduction : who, where, what, when

Describe your egg -draw on ideas,name ,country

Start the, instructions

What happened during the race.

What happened to your friends .






Paragraph 1 - Introduction
introduction : who, where, what, when
1  sentences
MakerBots & Drones
2  sentences
Makeymakeys & Hyperduinos
Write Here:
On Monday we had an  egg race, Rm 9   walked  to the park and we got an egg and a vivid, we drew a face on it. We had a spoon then picked up our egg and placed the egg on top of it.




Paragraph 2   

2  sentences
MakerBots & Drones
3  sentences
Makeymakeys & Hyperduinos
Write Here:
Our class rm 9 got into a line because we were  about to start the race. Our teacher told us the instructions then we started the race .





Paragraph 3   

2  sentences
MakerBots & Drones
3  sentences
Makeymakeys & Hyperduinos
Write Here:
My friend lucy’s egg went splat on the ground, she was terrified! Then someone else dropped there egg it was calais’s egg her egg went smash on the floor.




Paragraph 4 - Conclusion   
What was your highlight.
1  sentences
MakerBots & Drones
1  sentences
Makeymakeys & Hyperduinos
Write Here:
My highlight was when we got to draw on a egg it was fun.



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