WALT: write an interesting recount by adding detail to the end of our sentences.
WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.
Topic: PES Olympics Egg 20metre Sprint race.
Audience: PES, friends, teacher, whanau, worldwide blog audience.
Purpose: To tell the worldwide people who read our blogs about our egg race.
Text type: Recount
Planning: Juicy words to help you add detail to your sentences
Yolk, sprint, frightened, nervous, killing, died, happy, excited, shaking, crunching, crunched, spoon, running, fighting, rotten, egg, decorating, designing, name,eggy, sadly, hair, pen, vivid, country,brazil buddy, Olympics, crying, PES Olympics, frustrated, delicate,
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introduction : who, where, what, when
Describe your egg -draw on ideas,name ,country
Start the, instructions
What happened during the race.
What happened to your friends .
Paragraph 1 - Introduction
introduction : who, where, what, when
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1 sentences
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MakerBots & Drones
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2 sentences
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Makeymakeys & Hyperduinos
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On Monday we had an egg race, Rm 9 walked to the park and we got an egg and a vivid, we drew a face on it. We had a spoon then picked up our egg and placed the egg on top of it.
Paragraph 2
2 sentences
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3 sentences
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Makeymakeys & Hyperduinos
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Our class rm 9 got into a line because we were about to start the race. Our teacher told us the instructions then we started the race .
Paragraph 3
2 sentences
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3 sentences
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Makeymakeys & Hyperduinos
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My friend lucy’s egg went splat on the ground, she was terrified! Then someone else dropped there egg it was calais’s egg her egg went smash on the floor.
Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
What was your highlight.
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1 sentences
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1 sentences
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My highlight was when we got to draw on a egg it was fun.
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