Describing a setting - Pt England
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When I arrived at pt England school I was walking to class I saw my teachers Mrs West and Mrs Buchanan. After a while the bell rang RIIIIIING! After the bell rang we had a team 4 assembly. The took a while but it was fun! So after that our teachers told us to go to our literacy class. at literacy class our teacher
Mrs west told us to go put our shoes on and make a line outside and then we went to the field to take our new pictures for our blog. As we were there I could smell the air and burning wheat on the other side of the gate.I could hear birds singing and loud wind.
I could not taste nothing but air running through my mouth.I touched soft feathers the hard ground and prickly pines.what I saw large trees a smelly creek also petty blooming flowers and clean grass.
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